Do u like this song I wrote it?
I hear the flowers kinda crying loud The breezes sound in sad Oh no Tell me when did we become, So cold and empty inside Lost a way long time ago Did
I hear the flower's kinda crying loud
The breeze's sound in sad
Oh no
Tell me when did we become,
So cold and empty inside
Lost a way long time ago
Did we really turn out blind
We don't see that we keep hurting each other no
All we do is just fight
Now we share the same bright sun,
The same round moon
Why don't we share the same love
Tell me why not
Life is shorter than most have thought
Hold My Hand
There are many ways to do it right
Hold My Hand
Turn around and see what we have left behind
Hold My Hand my friend
We can save the good spirit of me and you
For another chance
And let's pray for a beautiful world
A beautiful world I share with you
Children seem like they've lost their smile
On the new blooded playgrounds
Oh no
How could we ignore , heartbreaking crying sounds
And we're still going on
Like nobody really cares
And we just stopped feeling all the pain because
Like it's a daily basic affair
Now we share the same bright sun,
The same round moon
Why don't we share the same love
Tell me why not
Life is shorter than most have thought
Hold My Hand
There are many ways to do it right
Hold My Hand
Turn around and see what we have left behind
Hold My Hand my friend
We can save the good spirit of me and you
For another chance
And let's pray for a beautiful world
A beautiful world I share with you
No matter how far I might be
I'm always gonne be your neighbor
There's only one small planet where to be
So I'm always gonna be your neighbor
We cannot hide, we can't deny
That we're always gonna be neighbors
You're neighbor, my neighbor
We're neighbors
So Hold My Hand
There are many ways to do it right
Hold My Hand
Turn around and see what have left behind
So Hold My Hand
There are many ways to do it right
Hold My Hand
Turn around and see what have left behind
Hold My Hand my friend
We can save the good spirit of me and you
For another chance
And let's pray for a beautiful world
A beautiful world I share with you
or:I hear the flower's kinda crying loud The breeze's sound in sad Oh no Tell me when did we become, So cold and empty inside Lost a way long time ago Did we really turn out blind We don't see that we keep hurting each other no All we do is just fight Now we share the same bright sun, The same round moon Why don't we share the same love Tell me why not Life is shorter than most have thought Hold My Hand There are many ways to do it right Hold My Hand Turn around and see what we have left behind Hold My Hand my friend We can save the good spirit of me and you For another chance And let's pray for a beautiful world A beautiful world I share with you Children seem like they've lost their smile On the new blooded playgrounds Oh no How could we ignore , heartbreaking crying sounds And we're still going on Like nobody really cares And we just stopped feeling all the pain because Like it's a daily basic affair Now we share the same bright sun, The same round moon Why don't we share the same love Tell me why not Life is shorter than most have thought Hold My Hand There are many ways to do it right Hold My Hand Turn around and see what we have left behind Hold My Hand my friend We can save the good spirit of me and you For another chance And let's pray for a beautiful world A beautiful world I share with you No matter how far I might be I'm always gonne be your neighbor There's only one small planet where to be So I'm always gonna be your neighbor We cannot hide, we can't deny That we're always gonna be neighbors You're neighbor, my neighbor We're neighbors So Hold My Hand There are many ways to do it right Hold My Hand Turn around and see what have left behind So Hold My Hand There are many ways to do it right Hold My Hand Turn around and see what have left behind Hold My Hand my friend We can save the good spirit of me and you For another chance And let's pray for a beautiful world A beautiful world I share with you
or:Wow well done that song is fabulous try to turn it into a poem.That song is the best!
or:I really love ur song/poem! It makes me hapi and hapi over and over again and again. I wish like reading it over and over again and again. I wanna take the sweet words in it, i wanna share the love just as the brigh sun and the round moon.........
or:It's amazing like it a lot....!!!! it seems like more of a poem. And express lovely feelings through this song. Great job....!!!!
