How can I word this better?
The sentence is: "He smiled, making his way towards a black Range Rover. He took out a pair of keys, unlocking the doors. He opened the door for me, t
The sentence is:
"He smiled, making his way towards a black Range Rover. He took out a pair of keys, unlocking the doors. He opened the door for me, then shutting it behind me."
I want it more descriptive, there should be tension between them, but it doesn't seem to phase him.
or:The sentence is: \"He smiled, making his way towards a black Range Rover. He took out a pair of keys, unlocking the doors. He opened the door for me, then shutting it behind me.\"I want it more descriptive, there should be tension between them, but it doesn't seem to phase him.
or:Smiling, he makes his was towards a black range rover. He takes out a pair of keys from his pocket, then unlocks the doors. He holds the door open for me and motions for me to enter. I walk past him and he shuts the door behind him.
