Is this a poem? If not can you turn it in to one? If it is one can you fix it?

You act strong for us but when I look at you I know your in pain, I see you struggling, I wish I could take your place. I ask myself why you . You tel

You act strong for us but when I look at you I know your in pain, I see you struggling, I wish I could take your place. I ask myself why you . You tell us not to be scared to be strong but that's just to hard for me. I fear that you could leave me any second, I fear that you might not see me graduate, not see me get married, not see me become a successful women. So for you I will act strong but just know deep inside I'm scared

or:You act strong for us but when I look at you I know your in pain, I see you struggling, I wish I could take your place. I ask myself why you . You tell us not to be scared to be strong but that's just to hard for me. I fear that you could leave me any second, I fear that you might not see me graduate, not see me get married, not see me become a successful women. So for you I will act strong but just know deep inside I'm scared

or:it could be a poem most are where they rhime and have reason you need to change some of your format mabe put more touching words add them where you already have bases but you got a good start put some heart in there and rewrite it and see where the depth is

or:beautiful!!!

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