Please corract my tiny essay for me ! I want you guys to help?
This is my rough essay to keeping my promise for try something for 30days well it’s 10th of june 2015. i bought contact renzs . i clothing up my
This is my rough essay to keeping my promise for try something for 30days
well it’s 10th of june 2015.
i bought contact renzs . i clothing up my self and went out
it was really hot ! when i went out , my back got sweat
i felt that i don’t want to go out
it’s nearly summer . theseday i really noticed that summer is already come infront my nose
the worst thing is i should go out for work after 10 minutes
there’re a lot of people walking around my home
in korea there is a virus called merrs
it take almost eight people’s birth.. this make people got afraid
ten of thousand of people got this ill, but the goverment didn’t do anything for them
when the administer ciff of seoul city trying to make some way to solve and provent this ill
goverment said “ he trying to get population , for being president”
what the hell is going on this country…
i hope they help them whom got ill and i hope that they share their information to co- operation
this is really awkard so please check my writing !
and .. corract in grammers or words !
or:This is my rough essay to keeping my promise for try something for 30days well it\u2019s 10th of june 2015. i bought contact renzs . i clothing up my self and went out it was really hot ! when i went out , my back got sweat i felt that i don\u2019t want to go out it\u2019s nearly summer . theseday i really noticed that summer is already come infront my nosethe worst thing is i should go out for work after 10 minutes there\u2019re a lot of people walking around my homein korea there is a virus called merrsit take almost eight people\u2019s birth.. this make people got afraid ten of thousand of people got this ill, but the goverment didn\u2019t do anything for them when the administer ciff of seoul city trying to make some way to solve and provent this ill goverment said \u201c he trying to get population , for being president\u201d what the hell is going on this country\u2026 i hope they help them whom got ill and i hope that they share their information to co- operation this is really awkard so please check my writing ! and .. corract in grammers or words !
or:well it\u2019s 10th of june 2015.i bought contact renzs . i clothing up my self and went outit was really hot ! when i went out , my back got sweati felt that i don\u2019t want to go outit\u2019s nearly summer . theseday i really noticed that summer is already come infront my nosethe worst thing is i should go out for work after 10 minutesthere\u2019re a lot of people walking around my homein korea there is a virus called merrsit take almost eight people\u2019s birth.. this make people got afraidten of thousand of people got this ill, but the goverment didn\u2019t do anything for themwhen the administer ciff of seoul city trying to make some way to solve and provent this illgoverment said \u201c he trying to get population , for being president\u201dwhat the hell is going on this country\u2026i hope they help them whom got ill and i hope that they share their information to co- operationI hape theses holps! I get renzes on eyes two! I hape I howe mayd ull teh corractshuns yu wantud.
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