Question about rapping flow?

Ive been writing rap lyrics my last 10 days and I was wondering something...When Im done with my lyrics it sounds underground which is not what I want

Ive been writing rap lyrics my last 10 days and I was wondering something...When Im done with my lyrics it sounds underground which is not what I want..My lyrics telling my struggles and stuff like that meaning real things..when Im rapping it I dont like the flow of it I mean its too slow for me normally im flowin like bone thugs or asap rocky bit it seems like i dont know how to write lyrics that make my flow fast I need help

or:Ive been writing rap lyrics my last 10 days and I was wondering something...When Im done with my lyrics it sounds underground which is not what I want..My lyrics telling my struggles and stuff like that meaning real things..when Im rapping it I dont like the flow of it I mean its too slow for me normally im flowin like bone thugs or asap rocky bit it seems like i dont know how to write lyrics that make my flow fast I need help


or:Hey, man. Sorry your question went unanswered for so long.I'm no professional rapper, nor do I want to be one, but I do write raps just for fun when I have spare time. I did a little bit of searching around the internet for you, and I found out that some people just can't rap fast. Maybe fast rapping just isn't made for your style. Also, you say you've been rapping for 10 days, right? Well, maybe you need to just keep practicing a bit more. Maybe choose words that kind of force your mouth to rap faster and maybe you'll get used to it and it'll start coming more naturally. I honestly have no idea if I helped or not, but I hope I did. :)-Tyger \"\u266bMusic4Lyf\u266b\"

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