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Verse 1: I lived my whole life searching on somebody to love.I found it but it was too above (just like a dove). I watching her talking and smiling.Im

Verse 1: I lived my whole life searching on somebody to love.I found it but it was too above (just like a dove). I watching her talking and smiling.I'm so depressed (i'm just standing) I can do nothing but watching. Chorus: She was the angel of love to me.That always flying above me.She tends to my heart.But she was hundreds of miles apart.She close to my heart.She glows it by lights. Verse 2: She was so close to my heart.And her eyes glow in my heart.Her words is like an arrows.Addressed to my heart to remove the sorrows.Only she can make me happy or make me sad.But what can i do i can't make you love me too.

or:Verse 1: I lived my whole life searching on somebody to love.I found it but it was too above (just like a dove). I watching her talking and smiling.I'm so depressed (i'm just standing) I can do nothing but watching. Chorus: She was the angel of love to me.That always flying above me.She tends to my heart.But she was hundreds of miles apart.She close to my heart.She glows it by lights. Verse 2: She was so close to my heart.And her eyes glow in my heart.Her words is like an arrows.Addressed to my heart to remove the sorrows.Only she can make me happy or make me sad.But what can i do i can't make you love me too.


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