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i write this song and i want an opinion .plzGathered here with my family... My neighbours and my friendsStanding firm together against oppression hold

i write this song and i want an opinion .plz

Gathered here with my family
... My neighbours and my friends
Standing firm together against oppression holding hands
It doesn't matter where you're from
Or if you're young, old, women or man
We're here for the same reason; we want to take back our land

Oh God thank you...
For giving us the strength to hold on
And now we're here together

Calling you for freedom, freedom
We know you can hear our call, ooh oh
We're calling for freedom, fighting for freedom
We know you won't let us fall, ooh no
We know you're here with us

No more being prisoners in our homes
No more being afraid to talk
Our dream is just to be free, just to be free
Now when we've taking our first step
Towards a life of complete freedom
We can see our dream getting closer and closer, we're almost there

Oh God thank you...
For giving us the strength to hold on
And now we're here together

Calling you for freedom, freedom
We know you can hear our call, ooh oh
We're calling for freedom, fighting for freedom
We know you won't let us fall, ooh no

I can feel the pride in the air
And it makes me strong to see everyone
Standing together holding hands in unity
Shouting out loud demanding their right for freedom
... This is it and we're not backing of
Oh God we know you hear our call

And we're calling you for freedom, freedom
We know you can hear our call, ooh oh
We're calling for freedom, fighting for freedom
We know you won't let us fall, ooh no

We're calling you for freedom, freedom
We know you can hear our call, ooh oh
We're calling for freedom, fighting for freedom
We know you won't let us fall, ooh no
We know you're here with us

or:i write this song and i want an opinion .plzGathered here with my family... My neighbours and my friendsStanding firm together against oppression holding handsIt doesn't matter where you're fromOr if you're young, old, women or manWe're here for the same reason; we want to take back our landOh God thank you...For giving us the strength to hold onAnd now we're here togetherCalling you for freedom, freedomWe know you can hear our call, ooh ohWe're calling for freedom, fighting for freedomWe know you won't let us fall, ooh noWe know you're here with usNo more being prisoners in our homesNo more being afraid to talkOur dream is just to be free, just to be freeNow when we've taking our first stepTowards a life of complete freedomWe can see our dream getting closer and closer, we're almost thereOh God thank you...For giving us the strength to hold onAnd now we're here togetherCalling you for freedom, freedomWe know you can hear our call, ooh ohWe're calling for freedom, fighting for freedomWe know you won't let us fall, ooh noI can feel the pride in the airAnd it makes me strong to see everyoneStanding together holding hands in unityShouting out loud demanding their right for freedom... This is it and we're not backing ofOh God we know you hear our callAnd we're calling you for freedom, freedomWe know you can hear our call, ooh ohWe're calling for freedom, fighting for freedomWe know you won't let us fall, ooh noWe're calling you for freedom, freedomWe know you can hear our call, ooh ohWe're calling for freedom, fighting for freedomWe know you won't let us fall, ooh noWe know you're here with us


or:the words are good!!!!!!!!!!!I love it!1 suggestion!try to work the name of God in a different way.Example: J. Ingram & m. MacDonald had a song in the 80's called; ya mo be therethere was a reason for that!With the way top 40 music is!They had to com e up with a way to still use the name God!But in a different way!Try to look at those who lost their lives and have gained the most when it come to freedom.The break-up of the former u. s. s.r.!

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